The music fills her ears,
in an otherwise silent room.
Layed out on her bedroom floor.
Surrounded by her sheets of notes,
shapes that speak a language of their own.
The view outside her window,
a world composed of harmony.
From the counting crows above,
to the beatles that inhabit the earth.
She listens closely to the rhythm
that soon reaches the dephs of her soul.
Before too long she drifts away.
carried by her favorite lullaby.
I can't describe this but I like it.
ReplyDeletei really enjoyed your poem. i mean the way u tied the bedroom and the music together was fantastic. the sheet of notes was my favorite line because it really tied it together for me. The poem appeals to the sound sense so well it was like i could hear the the birds that you hadmentioned. This assignment was a good match for u.
ReplyDeleteI like the imagery utilized and the how it's depicted with the language. I like the mood and the tone of the poem which is calm.
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